Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a psitive or negative development?
There is no denial that going hand in hand with the ground shaking development of Internet, a plenty of substitutions come about with unexpected advantage. One of those is the emergence of online courses which I am in favour that it is far mor beneficial for human.
On the one hand, there is a group who stage a protest against the widespread of courses on the Internet for numerous reasons. First of all, this kind of study method limits the time of face to face conversation which is crucial for students in case of asking and sharing information between peers or between students and professors whether there is misunderstanding. moreover, one of its other major drawbacks is that students can experience the reduction of motivation in terms of selfstudy or without partner, which can be a daunting task for students to tackle with.
Despite several demerits I expressed above, it is my firm conviction that the advantage is overwhelmed the drawbacks. The improvement of online courses plays an important role in students life when it is appreciate to flexible timetable as well as ease the time management process in the busy life. In addition, students can avoid passive learning by freely determining contend and subjects they intrigued in to absorb. The most fundamental function of self- study is that students can reach their our potential and improve their prospect when solving and searching for the answer by themselves. Not only prevent time consuming and other fees such as transportation, government can alleviate the financial burden allocated in education whether it is facility or books. This up to date studying method can be accessed to by a wide range of age and country. For instance, a man at the late forties in South east asia can apply for one of the online course even it is taken place in the western hemisphere without any barrier and gap.
In conclusion, apart from negligible disadvantages, online courses have alter the way human approach the knowledge storage, which is worth to be considered as a pathway for students to attend university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99423631124 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90567953014 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582132564841 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.062634993 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147812983445 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527949626047 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343765046911 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803998936382 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391141697704 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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