People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world. What are the reason for this and how can people learn more about the natural world?
There is no denial that in modern days, human become isolated with the natural world so that it is obvious that they have no awareness about there surrounded environment. The driving forces behind this situation should be taken into account, however, the measures lie in hands of individuals.
First of all, there are numerous reasons resulting in the reduction in understanding of people about the natural environment. One of the most predominant contributors is that traditional life was got rid of and replaced by a hectic lifestyle when most of employees and students work and study indoors. This trend brings about less and less time people spend contacting to nature. Another factors give rise to this situation is that traditional customs which is connected with the natural world are eliminated and forgotten. For instance, there was a harvest festival when rites are carried out such as dancing and singing in order to celebrate a bumping crop year and wish for bountiful harvest in years to come. The little awareness is also stem from the ground-braking development of technology when young people engrossed in electronic devices instead of nature.
From the reasons I expressed above, tackling such problem is not an easy task, however, there are measures that can be taken. Firstly, people, especially adolescence have responsibility to take part in voluntary environmental work, participate in whether it is an organization or local activities like collecting trash or planting tree. Another feasible approach is from education that beside science, students should be imparted knowledge about nature and environment in school like introducing the importance of environment or threat would be posed if nature is damaged. Not only school but also media and social network can play a small part to help people associate to nature that documentaries about this issue should e share widely.
In short, little knowledge about nature put human life in jeopardy so that raising awareness about it is a responsibility of every individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the employees') or simply say ''most employees''.
Suggestion: most of the employees; most employees
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'stemmed'.
Suggestion: stemmed
... to come. The little awareness is also stem from the ground-braking development of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3036809816 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91223220065 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8583289982 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336701720854 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105945374297 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750705560761 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177792346403 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442671136235 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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