More people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is this? Is it a good thing or bad thing?
These days, many people prefer to spend their leisure time by sitting in front of television to watch movies. This is mainly because of increase in work load which barely leaves enough energy in individuals to indulge themselves in any physical activity. In my opinion, I believe it to be a bad thing as it is likely to increase health issues to the society.
There is no doubt that people these days are bearing excessive work load than ever before. They usually spend long working-hours at their offices, which barely leaves energy in them to participate in any physical activities. They hence choose to watch movies for entertainment purposes that helps them to relax. In addition, the advertising industry and media is also promoting actors and actresses in various glamourous ways which encourages the youth to follow these stars by watching their movies.
In my opinion, I regard it as a bad thing because it promotes unhealthy lifestyle among people. People must sit for long hours in front of a television to watch a movie which barely involves any physical movement. Therefore, it is likely to cause obesity in people, which in turn can lead to various health problems. In addition, I believe one should spend their free-time in active activities for example, dance, swimming, yoga or even music classes which can help individuals to develop their skill-set rather than wasting their time in passive activities such as watching movies.
To recapitulate, many people opt to watch movies because of excessive work-load and the desire to follow their favorite actors and/or actresses. However, I regard such a trend to be detrimental for the society as it is likely to lead to various health issues among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02797202797 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6641888255 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513986013986 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1250382575 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267892491728 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882326650121 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719633818249 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168924547655 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763086235392 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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