Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion?
In today's contemporary world, the virtue of human nature areadapted to state of the art technologies and facilities in a way that they can not imagine life without the gadgets and digital equipments. As every coin has two sides, these high-tech facilitites come with the expense of damage of the Erath's natural resources. human activities like creating pollution in a air, chopping of forests, unstoppable population have detrimining effects on earth that has begun the global warming effects.
my reasons for my standpoints are elaborated below.
At first, Industrialism has increased the amount of air population in a such level that in some parts of the word we need to carry mouth mask to prevent from air borne diseases. For example, last year I went to Beijing in china which has highest amount of air population in the world. Most of the people was wearing mouth mask to protect themselves from polluted air breathing. However, government of china has introduced some policies to control pollution particularly created by vehicles to reduce the pollution. It had become difficult for me amd my family to breath without mask over there.
Secondly, amount of forest has decreased as cities has started growing expanded. As tress are the main source of the oxygen and keep the air clear by breathing in carbon dioxide, the chances of filtering of air has been decreasing day by day. The trees also play the part to keep the temparature down but reduced amount of them are keeping the temparture high which ultimately stared the global warning effects. In global warming effects temperature is going high in such way that the ice from the North and south poles are melting which is going to increase the level of sea water and life near the bay area might get into the trouble.
In the nutshell, earth is constantly harmed by humans and if we do not cease to damage her, we should be ready for bad consequences in later. So start saving your natural resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...he virtue of human nature areadapted to state of the art technologies and facilities in a way th...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
...damage of the Eraths natural resources. human activities like creating pollution in a...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n activities like creating pollution in a air, chopping of forests, unstoppable p...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... has begun the global warming effects. my reasons for my standpoints are elaborat...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...t year I went to Beijing in china which has highest amount of air population in the world. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91044776119 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65899617095 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7707831622 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103563349864 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319924309121 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050320048007 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619010576353 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669681478392 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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