Certain kinds of music promote learning in their life. Do you agree or disagree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on whether certain kinds of music promote learning in life can lead to thought-provoking discussion. Irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist of either side, my view is that it is the music that not only helps to learn in the day to day life but also works as meditation and can be opted as a career. In this essay, I shall delineate my points and calculations by considering both sides of arguments.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my viewpoints. One of them is that with the music learning one can not only conquer the fear of public speaking but also with the music learning one can come out of depression and much other life-threatening diseases. Thus, music is rightly justified in terms of medication and learning.
There are a few aspects of music that needed special mentioning. Firstly, with the music learning one can opt a career in the movie industry as a music director, sound engineering and many more. Thus, opting music for the career is rightly justified.
I see there is potential evidence to support my point of view I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that considering the trend of music, it can be worked as a cure in terms of life-threatening disease and music can also be good from one’s career point of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d from one's career point of view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76150627615 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95589445377 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535564853556 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9533855139 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214522707359 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858468687861 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652778755121 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136752289701 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456275523728 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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