Urban sprawl is an increasing issue around the world. One way in which to solve this issue is to construct cities vertically rather than horizontally. Are such cities a good idea?
It is irrefutable to say that, high rise buildings are very famous these days and every country is focusing to build high rise apartments rather than landed houses. Some people believe that urban sprawl is creating problems and only vertical buildings can solve this issue. This essay will succinctly discuss the problems of spreaded horizontal houses and its solution in vertical tall buildings.
Firstly, The sprawl housing needs a lot of land area to develop because each house can be miximum two story which accommodate one family. Another big problem with landed house societies is that, you have to travel more to reach from one place to another. For example, If one house is in street number one and other house is in a street far from one, then one needs to walk or drive by car to reach there. This problem does not exists in high rise housing which has different floors.
On the other hand, a multi story building can adjust more houses on a small land area which is more convenient as compared to sprawl. Furthermore, all the markets and shopping centers can be easily accessible at short distance for each of the occupant living in high rise building houses. For example, If you want to move from one floor to another you can use lifts to move and change floor quickly. Horizontal buildings are solving the housing issues in urban areas and more poppulation can be adjusted in a small city.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that we can solve the accommodation problem in urban cities by building multi story high rise apartments. In my opinion building such vertical cities is a good idea for the future planning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'story' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stories'.
Suggestion: stories
...p because each house can be miximum two story which accommodate one family. Another b...
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Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exist'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: exist
...r to reach there. This problem does not exists in high rise housing which has differen...
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Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'exist'
Suggestion: exist
...r to reach there. This problem does not exists in high rise housing which has differen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81754385965 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46818101303 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.045436238 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184754855322 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751176469417 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056845238198 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122539620532 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500710557833 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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