A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The idea of having a nation wide identical curriculum for all students may seem advantageous at first, but has a few flaws to it. I believe students should be given the freedom to chose their subjects at an early stage in life, so they can excel in fields of their interests.
Many students today are forced to study subjects which do not interest them. Many of our nation's youg minds are spending their valuable time studying subjects which they surely won't be pursuing a career in. One example of this is a student very much interested in physics who is cranking up his mind learning a subject like Biology which he knows for a fact that he won't be making a future of. A bright student who at a very young age is able to identify his/her interests should not be spending valuable time, money studyiing subjects that are of no interest to him/her.
In this day and age students are having pressure coping with many of their subjects. Some students fail to score grades on even those subjects which are interesting to them. These students perform miserabely particularly on subjects not of their interest. This leads to depressed young students, some of who may go on to commit suicide. Forcing a student to learn something he doen't want will always be harming the mental state of the student.
Due to the advent of technology, information is more easily avalable than ever. These young minds are exposed to the internet and the palothera of knowledge it has to offer at a very young age. They are quick to understand what they want to pursue in life and many of them want to start chasing their dreams at a young age. Supressing these talents by forcing them to learn things which don't benefit their career directly, does no good to the society.
While there are a few advantages of a unified ciricullum like, to make every student well rounded, taking away the freedom from the students to pursuing their own career path at a young age can be harmful to the students as well as society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
The idea of having a nation wide identical curriculum for all students m...
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Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s by forcing them to learn things which dont benefit their career directly, does no ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63661971831 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44475561029 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7736930993 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16190637056 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580869947988 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572834150822 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100468373378 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647570814555 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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