Some people say that we should not encourage sport games among schools because they lead to competition rather than cooperation. To what extend do you agree or disagree with?
Sports enrich student’s campus life and energize their physiques. Notwithstanding, a heated debate in whether sports should be encourage in schools has been risen. I personally disagree with those who remonstrate about athletic events for the youth.
It is inevitable that competitive behavior between students would be occurred during sport contests. However, contestant’s rivalry in a championship is not significant. Looking at the whole picture, witness of student giving each other affectionate gestures is noticeable things that we can encounter. Take my football club for example, after each match, friendly handshake or fist bump is what we confer with our rivals.
Not only competition but cooperation also arise after athletic games. Sports are applied for generating a unity of contestant, especially in team sports. Thus, method of playing harmoniously along with partners could be acquired by students and sports games among schools are hold to mainly enhance friendship and mutual understanding.
In general, sport games among schools lead to both competition and cooperation and it is undeniably beneficial in terms of both physically and mentally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...ated debate in whether sports should be encourage in schools has been risen. I personally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77142857143 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18688127248 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731428571429 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0204190733 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8181818182 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226702375657 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721091045541 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523936821342 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134985946101 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315322911436 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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