Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In recent years, people tend to be have children when they are getting older. In my essay, some explanations for this social trend will be put forward, before an analysis of its impacts on the society and the family is given.
The tendency of women postponing their first childbirth later in their life could be attributed to several factors. One reason is that more and more women have prioritized the career over marital arrangements and children. Giving births at the early age may prevent them from standing a higher chance of promotion and fame as it seems to be difficult for them to assimilate into an over-changing work environment after the maternity leave. Another reason is that old parents are more likely to raise their children better. The years of ups and downs in life have equipped them with more knowledge, experience, and skills in order to take good care of their kids. In addition, the solid economic background could be a reason as to why parents in the modern society are willing to have children latter.
On the other hand, I strongly convinced that the drawbacks of postponing the pregnancy outweigh the advantages. Firstly, scientific have shown that women getting pregnant after 35 years old are more likely to suffer potential health risks such as miscarriage or newborn babies might be at the great risk of having Down’s syndrome. Secondly, detrimental effect of late pregnancy is the ageing of population. As the matter of fact that, in Japan, the number of elderly people increase significantly while the figure for newborn babies is little in the recent years. As result, this tendency will be able to affect the quality of future workforce as well as the generation gap between the two distant generations.
In conclusion, there are a number of reasons why more and more people decide to have kids later in their life. I strongly believe that this trend contains a lot of negative effects to individual families and society.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94561933535 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64972078785 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567975830816 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9503072037 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338741492455 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116850511151 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1271403387 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211038335694 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122672310798 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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