The provided chart represents ten countries having the largest amount of producing and consuming electricity in the year of 2014. As obvious from the chart, China was ranked as the top country in both production and consumption electricity, with 5,398 billion kWh and 5,322 billion kWh respectively.
Followed by China was the United State with 4,099 billion kWh of electricity was made and 3,866 billion kWh was used. Far from them was Russia ranked as the third place the amount of produced and consumed electricity were 1,057 and 1,038 respectively. The others countries also appeared in top ten were Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and ranked as 10th was Korea (produced 936 billion kWh, consumed 857 billion kWh).
It is noticeable that all ten countries have the amount of produced and consumed electricity relatively same and most of the country had the amount of produced electricity higher than consumed one, only the exception of Germany with 527 billion kWh of electricity was produced was and 583 billion kWh of electricity was used.
- To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history? 61
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think the caused of this? can you suggest some possible solutions? 84
- Some people think that women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and air force just like men.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Task 2: Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your opinion?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12716763006 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69030282546 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49710982659 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.820972802 43.030603864 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.4 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126923122294 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899117937177 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588639974277 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1193451249 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062720558421 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.2329268293 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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