The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Competition is healthy for the development of the person, through competition on;y a person can get to know whether the person is ready for real world to face challenges.Cooperation in it's meaning is working together, it promotes team building. I think that the Author's claim that to prepare for leadership one should focus on coöperation not competition is wrong , to be a good leader you should have both the qualities cooperation and competitiveness.
If we take an example of Steve Jobs, the most renowned person in technical world and a successful CEO. He was the person who introduced the concept of iPhone to the world and today the company is renowned for the quality of it's products and innovations it brings with each new product launch and,if he was not competitive some other company would have gone ahead of apple in manufacturing that product or that concept may never had seen light. This shows us that competitiveness is as important as coöperation.
Today a leader in the industry has to face competition from many other corporates and there is competitiveness within his own company, in government also to get elected the person has to fight the election with other competitors and win it. There is a great example of competition in government the "presidential election", the candidates have to compete against each other to win the election and to prove that they are capable of sitting in the office. If the competitiveness is not present in the candidate he will lag behind the others and it may cost him the election.
Secondly, to prove that competition and corporation is important for leaders we will look into the example of Sports, the captain of a team has to make his team competitive to win the match and also he has to show cooperation in working with his teammates so that the team will perform better. Sports is very good example of cooperation and competitiveness in a equal way.
Some may argue that competition destroys the ability of person to do better, the leader may not be able to work in his full potential if he thinks of competition, there may be cases where this may be true like the Head of R&D department of a company here the person has to show his cooperation skills because this field demands innovations and result not competition, it can be achieved through working together but there may be a cse where other company's R&D dempartment also working on same product launced before them in market this is a setback for them, so with cooperation a sense of competitivenss is aslo needed for a leeader to become successfull.
To sum up, the above examples and arguments presented to make my claim and also considering the challenges presented against it we can conclude that a successfull leader not only should have quality of cooperation but also of competition.
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Suggestion: Cooperation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as to, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89834024896 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13115769365 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458506224066 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.112257523 60.3974514979 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.75 118.986275619 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1666666667 23.4991977007 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139278851544 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491477374304 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370870247662 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706543230208 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397631039704 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 14.1392134831 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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