Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers. Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
We are living in an era of high technological revolution. While it is believed by some that this technological advancement is beneficial for workers, whereas, others asserts that this trend cause detrimental effects on workers lives. In my opinion, technology not only suffice the needs of humankind by providing better products but also elevate the living and working standard of workers.
On the one hand, it is often believed that new technology brings immense flexibility and scalability to workers in terms of products or service development and I agree. As new technology pave paths to alleviate manual repetitive tasks, improve quality and raise production rates through automation or any other subtle approach. In other words, new technology enables new effective ways to work and achieve goals that in turn raise the bottom lines of organization. Moreover, it introduces more features that workers can leverage to ensure safety while at work, reduce the efforts and time to complete task.
On the other hand, some people argue that advancement in technology could be challenging to workers, as it jeopardize their jobs. To elucidate, if majority of the manual work would be replaced by automation or robots through new technologies like machine learning and artificial intelligence, this will eliminate the need of large workforce and workers would lose their jobs. The other issue that workers face is to train themselves on ever changing technological advancements - technology booming today will become obsolete sooner and they have to re-train themselves with current trends.
All in all, while people may vary in their opinions, I firmly believe that workers are highly benefited through technical modifications around the world and they should embrace this further. Future belongs to those who have zeal to transform and deliver results in an efficient manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...eal to transform and delivering results in an efficient manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56081081081 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17939978996 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1402921708 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248663326387 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895368900395 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638762494194 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138732906371 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521184412907 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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