Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Traditional way of reading news from daily newspaper has transformed with the existence of internet. The way trend is gaining momentum and changing the reading habits of people, I certainly can assume that newspaper will soon going to be obsolete.
Firstly, technology has enabled people around the globe to be connected in close network. This help them to get alerts, details and updates on any incident happening at any corner of the world. In other words, various applications on smartphones, tablets or computer devices provides us with latest feeds on the news of our particular interest we had subscribed for. Whereas, newspapers has limitation to get us informed on the matters that had happened till any particular time, rest comes in later edition. Moreover, one would have to purchase and carry the newspaper to read it, on the other hand latest information could be accessed through few clicks in our very handy device(smart phones) that we prefer to keep with us always.
Secondly, now people are becoming more aware about the environment issues. Indeed, printing the newspaper do cause detrimental effects on nature as the paper and ink used is derived through processing precious natural resources. This deters the concerned people to buy newspapers, rather they prefer eco-friendly ways such as internet to read these news.
Thirdly, it is hard to share and store the news articles in physical format. Nowadays, people prefer to share the links of interesting or informative news through social media or communication applications, this extends the range of information accessibility. Also, saving these articles in digital form for future reference won't take much space on hard disk.
All in all, we are in era of high technological revolution and young generation is more inclined towards modern way of getting updated on happenings around the world. This can be seen as the threat to newspapers existence and I believe until next decade newspapers will not serve the same purpose as they do today.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...tablets or computer devices provides us with latest feeds on the news of our particular int...
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Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'hand the latest'.
Suggestion: hand the latest
... the newspaper to read it, on the other hand latest information could be accessed through f...
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Line 3, column 725, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...t phones that we prefer to keep with us always. Secondly, now people are becoming m...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...-friendly ways such as internet to read these news. Thirdly, it is hard to share and st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32522796353 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20610634483 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626139817629 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7392794351 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221073737054 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672958153404 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444011015368 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121488280609 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048772956335 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.