A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.
1- Say where you went,
2- Where you stayed,
3- What you can do there
4- What the food was like.
Hi Sara,
Hope you and your family are all well !
It was good to hear that you are planning for family holiday. This is much-needed to escape the monotony of life and feel refresh. You asked me for my advice concerning the destination to visit and I would like to recommend you to visit Kerela. I went there last year and was astonished by its natural beauty.
I think it would be great if you stay at our guest house there. It is currently vacant and have ample space to accommodate your family. Also, it will be cheap, you could spend more on sightseeing without worrying about hotel bills.
There are lots of things to do there. You could spend a day or two relaxing on beach. There are several Ayurvedic spa and massage centres. I highly recommend you to take massage from any of these. It feels so elated, relaxing and energetic at same time. Also, there is an excellent theme park which you ought to visit. It is an hour away by bus from guest house.
Do let me know if any arrangements required. I would be more than happy to do so.
Regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Sara, Hope you and your family are all well ! ...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ommend you to visit Kerela. I went there last year and was astonished by its natu...
^^
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e more than happy to do so. Regards, Aman
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45685279188 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3417792832 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639593908629 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0453424165 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.875 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3125 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349550895329 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867646412306 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990296717608 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182459638355 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897671138185 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.7 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.