Pollution and other environmental problems are resulting from the way that many countries are developing and becoming richer. Some think this cannot be avoided.
Environmentalists around the world emphasizes on dire need to protect our beautiful rivers, lakes and seas from the catastrophic effects of water pollution. We will discuss few major causes involved in elevating this pollution and also their related harmful effects.
Firstly, Industrialization plays a vital role in polluting our rivers by draining poisonous chemicals, colors and other wastes directly into rivers without apt treatment and complying with regulations. In addition to this, those people who litter waste or any other undissolvements into rivers must be held equally responsible. Beyond doubt, by doing all this we are not only contaminating the aquatic ecosystem but also wasting the valuable natural resources. In other words, all above mentioned leads to poor quality of water in our rivers, which can't be further used by mankind for any good.
This brings me to my second point, due to globalization and cross boundary trades traffic on sea has increased by multiple folds during last decade. Unfortunately, we also had met many accidents in sea due to any unforeseen conditions during this time, which in turn led to oil spills up to several miles from ships. This is a critical issue and environmentalists has raised myriads of concerns about it. Facts uncovered after research, done by Yale university, are quite revealing about the detrimental effects of oil spill on habitat of creatures. It state that these spills are responsible for sudden death of many water creatures and also the permanent migration of others. Well this may not look like of any importance to a layman, but researchers and environmentalists understand and feel the irreversible damage caused by these oil spills.
All in all, the way trend of polluting water gained momentum and contaminated our bio-diversity, ecosystem and nature in last decade is really a matter of concern to be resolved. As we see the menace caused by this could not be recouped any sooner.
- Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work. So which do you think is the best way to choose career.Give reasons for your answers and include 78
- Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining while others think that their sole purpose is to educate Which do you agree 100
- Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers. Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
- Climate change is now an accepted threat to out planet but there is not enough political actions to control excessive consumerism and pollution Do you agree 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r quality of water in our rivers, which cant be further used by mankind for any good...
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Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'states'?
Suggestion: states
...f oil spill on habitat of creatures. It state that these spills are responsible for s...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lly a matter of concern to be resolved. As we see the menace caused by this could ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, so, well, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22082018927 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06507097994 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640378548896 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9786847952 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.214285714 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149843579308 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500102455798 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259943163297 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899251815155 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184066385536 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.