International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The world seems to have shrunk. Computers, cellphones, internet and airplanes have brought the world within its grip. Today, many people visit foreign countries either for business purpose or for travel. In my opinion, this trend has brought plethora of admiring changes for both travellers and nations as compared to drawbacks it caused.
Admittedly, there are few minor drawbacks of international trip. Firstly, it is difficult to communicate with native people due to regional language. Although, english is most accepted language in the world but still many people around the globe either aren't familiar with it or reluctant to speak any other than their mother tongue. secondly, some people in eastern countries think that western invasion in their homelands is threat to their local culture, customs and traditions. In other words, people gets influenced and obsessed by foreign culture and tends to forget their own. Another possible issue is if that travellers does not leaves the country after their visa being expired and lives illegally. this put strain on nation growth as they utilize the country resources but do not pay taxes.
Nevertheless, despite the disadvantages above there are some serious benefits of international travel. Firstly, from the individual perspective one gets chance to explore new geography, culture and food. people love to come out of their monotonous life and embrace new world they landed into. secondly, it plays a vital role in strengthening nation's economy. In other words, it fosters new employment opportunities, business and infrastructure development. As people move in and out from country it allows foreign money to flow in. Also, many countries earn enormous revenue from their tourism sector.
All in all, I believe that impact of international travel on nation to strengthen it and on individual to experience good far outweighs the minor demerits of language, endangered culture and illicit acts that can be overcome easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39871382637 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78552369855 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617363344051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6801498372 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3684210526 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20539572053 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559916033886 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591893594667 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120223752475 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00955217625229 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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