Some people think that the main benefits of international cooperation isprotection of the environment,but others think that the main benefit is the world business.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about what aspects will be benefited maximally by global cooperation. In my opinion, the environment and world’s business can both be affected largely in a positive way.
On the one hand, protection of the environment is a vital aspect which people should pay more attention to. Multinational cooperation can draw more attention to the issue, since it will bring the individuals from all over the world together to put their efforts into the same problem. Meanwhile, the attention of multinational governments will raise people’s awareness of the importance of protecting the environment. For example, public serve advertisements shot by diverse group of famous persons, and it will be played all around the world to remind everyone how crucial it is to protect the environment.
On the other hand, international cooperation also brings huge benefits to world’s business. Since it can strengthen the relationship and stimulate the trade among numerous countries, world’s business will be improved. Moreover, international cooperation can make people get a better understanding of diverse cultures, which may attract more visitors to travel to other countries, so there will be more consumption which may push the world’s trade forward. In addition, it can help companies absorb new and various principles. Companies can make an innovative progress, which can strengthen the economy. Hence, economic developments can be promoted by the multinational communication
In conclusion, there are many benefits in international cooperation and it affects positively several fields. The protection of environment and the promotion of business are both the main benefits of multinational cooperation, which can make the world better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s business can both be affected largely in a positive way. On the one hand, protection of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73962264151 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35353460922 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6609808376 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192622052657 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792607990333 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712318291913 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142183751822 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609912841861 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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