Some people think that in this modern world, getting old is entirely bad. However, other people believe that the life of old people is much better now than it was in the past. Discuss both views.
People have different views about whether getting old is a good thing for them. In my opinion, old people can also enjoy their life in modern society
People who worry about getting old believe that it will make their life more troublesome. Firstly when people are over 60, their ability to move will decline, which make them have to rely on their next generation or the wheelchairs. So they cannot go to any place they like. Secondly, if they retire, they will lose their income and cannot make any contribution to their family. This means that old people can only be supported by their children instead of themselves.
However, old people can also have a better life because of the development of technology and medical care. In the past, old people only spent their free time on reading books or newspaper. Nowadays, internet make their retire life more colorful. For example, they can make a video call with their relatives by using mobile phone, and they can also buy anything they want in internet. Apart from that, modern medical systems can make sure old people have a healthy body and reduce the risk of illness. This also help old people have a longer life span.
In my views, it is true that people will face some troubles in their life with age, but this can be overcome by advanced technology. What is more, there are a number of old people who come back to the company because of their experience and knowledge. So I strongly believe that old people will have a better life in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...that old people will have a better life in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, in my opinion, in my view, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66917293233 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26314540501 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53007518797 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8644358751 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320583227596 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146407508912 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102093752235 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24647261074 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578423667987 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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