Consumption of the world's resource (such as oil,fresh water,etc)is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are the causes of this increased consumption? What can people do to reduce it?
There is an increasing trend in the amount of world’s resources consumed and it has risen to a dangerous level. I believe that the overly waste of resources by citizens and the larger demand of resources in social life are the main reasons.
The first reason why consumption of resources is increasing is that many resources do not be used in an economic way. Thus individuals make a large amount of waste in daily life since they cannot realize the value of the resources and they think supplies are infinite which cannot be used up. For example, when people wash their faces or brush their teeth, water will be used through the whole process. Even though they do not use the water all the time, they still let the water run.
Another cause is that persons have a larger demand of resources nowadays. In the past, there were not many factories for industry and petroleum. Today, however, the public pursue a higher standard of life, so they need more of the world’s resources (such as oil and woods) in order to complete their industrial construction and meet their demand of production.
It is important for people to pay more attention to resources protection, so measures should be taken to save resources. Firstly, governments should make a policy about taxation to supervise citizens on saving water so that they can get a better understanding of water’s preciousness. Secondly, factories should be limited in oil exploration and tree felling. Lastly, individuals should also plant some trees regularly. In such a way, they can protect the resources better.
In conclusion, although the consumption of the world’s resources is inevitable, the measures mentioned above could effectively slow down the increase of consumption and save the resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an economic way" with adverb for "economic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g is that many resources do not be used in an economic way. Thus individuals make a large amount o...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: ECONOMIC_ECONOMICAL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economical' (=affordable, cheap)?
Suggestion: economical
...hat many resources do not be used in an economic way. Thus individuals make a large amou...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rces do not be used in an economic way. Thus individuals make a large amount of wast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1095890411 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.852014001 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5121085078 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23043218993 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079166755208 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641556144 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134175429673 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406643340742 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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