some people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages whereas others it has many disadvantages.
discuss both views and give your opinion.
many people believe that using a bicycle as the main transport have a lot of benefits. yet, any people thing are biking bicycle also have disbenefits. the issue many countries in the world think using a bicycle has a lot of effects to healthy as well as reducing air pollution and also some countries think of bike by bicycle no efficient in this opinion both groups have his reasons.
firstly, a lot of developing countries in the world infuses campaign to biking bicycle in a city. this is make decreased air pollution which makes a negative impact on the environment and also it is not good for the body because a human would be breath on the outside but cause inhaling pollution raise getting sick such as lung cancer and others. in addition the general transportation can be also increasing traffic jump because of many cars on the street not good for transportation to make waste of time. these are making many countries make the campaign to using a bicycle in a city.
secondly, however, develop country have statement biking cycle not enough to decreasing pollution and make spend of time because they opinion electric car better than a bicycle and they believe that driving an electric car can be decreasing pollution and can spend time than a bicycle.
in conclusion, in era modern, a lot of research has a statement about bicycle such as advantages and disadvantages and then this issue having the twice different statement.
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- abstract 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83400809717 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68394488216 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506072874494 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7499950379 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197303772746 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11051095924 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103282033252 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120352055284 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897140033841 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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