Modern shopping malls are highly convenient for people however small markets are still popular among consumers.
In this modern era the large amount of shopping malls are inaugurated in my cites. malls with modern gesture are favor by people however because of their on advantage small scaler market are famous in people.
First and foremost it is irrefutable that there are number of points among them the main point is in this 21 countries the large amount of famous smart shopping malls are begin in the world like alpha one mall,Reliance mall,himalaya mall and so on.this types of malls can be provide high facility like people can easily park cars in the mall.for instance if consumer lost something expensive thing in mall then with the halp of camera security. one can find it easily.it can not found small market and street market.
Moreover,costumer can afford quality product in the shopping malls and also brand showrooms are available in the malls.which can provide choice of different facilities.morever shopping malls have some limited thing. so middle class family can not be afford malls.
On the other side,small market have their one advantage for commen people,we can find some products shop in the market commen people can afford the small market and products price is very lower in the market but traffic eassy and pollution problem is one of the most major problem in the small market. In my point of view shopping malls are shutebal for costumer durables and comparison and small market are suitable for groceries and vegetable but new day most of people can chooies the shopping malls for all the equipment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Malls
...ping malls are inaugurated in my cites. malls with modern gesture are favor by people...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...ount of famous smart shopping malls are begin in the world like alpha one mall,Relian...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Reliance
...e begin in the world like alpha one mall,Reliance mall,himalaya mall and so on.this types...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , himalaya
... world like alpha one mall,Reliance mall,himalaya mall and so on.this types of malls can ...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... then with the halp of camera security. one can find it easily.it can not found sma...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , costumer
...mall market and street market. Moreover,costumer can afford quality product in the shopp...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...shopping malls have some limited thing. so middle class family can not be afford m...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , small
... not be afford malls. On the other side,small market have their one advantage for com...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ve their one advantage for commen people,we can find some products shop in the mark...
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Line 4, column 457, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...for groceries and vegetable but new day most of people can chooies the shopping malls for all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9609375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59389118592 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51953125 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.0 49.4020404114 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.75 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361958991516 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16698454813 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881265898307 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230301414638 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087949493535 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.