Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government's responsibility. What is your opinion?
It is true that people hold different views on whether the government should cover the cost of healthcare and education. While some people believe that healthcare and education should be paid only by governments, I would argue that governments should shoulder the primary responsibility and the citizens are supposed to contribute partly.
On the one hand, in certain areas, people have to pay for healthcare and education. Treating serious health problems and meeting the demand for higher education are often associated with a considerable amount of finance, and this would be a huge financial burden if governments are handling such responsibilities. For example, a massive amount of money is required for patients who have cancers because the diagnosis of such disease is costly. Also, today, higher education is so much expensive. An enormous amount of money is needed to enhance higher education for all residents from kindergarten to university. The more governments spend money on healthcare and education, the fewer budgets will be spent on other areas which are also necessary such as environment, security.
On the other hand, governments are expected to allocate budgets for such public services such as healthcare and education. With the government implementing policies in favor of healthcare, citizens are less concerned about the fees for medical equipment, drugs, surgery. These policies may cut the patient's financial burden and thus increase their satisfaction with the government. Also, financial support for education brings benefit to many students, especially those who are poverty. By offering free training, expanding libraries, employing eminent lectures, the government is able to prevent students who cannot pay tuition from dropping out and help them improve their academic results.
In conclusion, it is essential for governments to allocate funds to healthcare and education. However, individuals should pay a proportion of the cost rather than entirely relying on governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...efit to many students, especially those who are poverty. By offering free training, exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59672131148 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01821755251 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570491803279 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2780771631 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269235611301 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938971350124 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659491243411 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177574753672 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386455381317 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.