Nowadays, ubiquitously there is an increase in drug addicts all over the world. Many people contemplate drug addicts needs to be imposed severe law of criminal punishment and sent to jail while others believe they should be treated in hospitals with good care like patients. This essay will discuss both views and in my opinion drug addicts should be given an opportunity to recover and treated.
Drug addiction has extremely adverse effects than compared to any other bad matter of courses. Drug addicts will not be self-conscious neither they will have a sense of humor to react to any situations that they face when they are at their extremes. For instance, when a drug addict is at their extreme habitual peak he/she would not mind killing a person for money or drugs, but they would not even remember that brutal event as they are not conscious. Globally spreading a lot of awareness about drug addiction and imposing stringent rules against drug manufacturers will create awareness.
Current generation youths all over the world, are addicted to one or other kind of habits. This addiction includes good and bad habits which range from a smartphone, sports, to other deadly habits like drugs. Due to the immaturity of consequences caused by some bad frictions, some people would not be able to recover and they would end up losing their lives. certainly, treated at earliest and with right medicines and care: both physically, mentally in good rehabilitation centers is like a re-birth for them.
To conclude, I believe drug addiction is like a disease that needs to be treated in hospitals with good care considering all aspects of that person in separate rehibition centers or hospitals.
- You have bought electronic equipment and within two days it started to go wrong. write a letter to shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product and services. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem. 81
- Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent to hospital.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- You have bought electronic equipment and within two days it started to go wrong. write a letter to shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product and services. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem. 84
- life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such a problem in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems c 61
- life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such a problem in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems c 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Certainly
...d they would end up losing their lives. certainly, treated at earliest and with right med...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, for instance, kind of, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04609929078 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68631708514 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0841995748 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382409434994 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134372587418 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113308038018 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243693074324 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133743866304 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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