Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
It is true that people hold different views about the role and function of museums. While some people believe that museums are the entertainment places to cheer up and relax people, others argue that museums need to focus on educational aims. Personally, I think both views are reasonable.
On the one hand, it can be claimed that the primary role of a museum is to entertain. Museums are often built as beautiful places with many beautiful pictures and statues, thus many people like going there to relax and taking pictures with their friends at the weekend. In some countries, parents often bring their children to museums to attend exciting activities. For example, the world coffee museum of the is a very famous destination for both local inhabitants and foreign visitors. There often celebrates some traditional Vietnamese games which are attractive for children. Museums are also right places for consumption. Museums usually store the worth history and culture of each region, so visitors often buy some souvenirs for their memories at museums.
On the other hand, museums have the principal responsibility to illustrate their educational contents to the public. The government has spent lots of money to repair museums, especially historical museums to attract tourist from all over the world and show the country's culture to the world. Moreover, museums can play a vital role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life. These knowledge are more interesting and reliable than reference books, thanks to the help of professional guides employed by museums. For instance, children would be happier to learn the mechanism of some instruments by operating them in museums instead of learning them from books.
In conclusion, it is clear that museums have an essential part of entertaining and giving common materials to people. I believe that a good museum should offer both attractive and educational experience so that residents could have fun in tandem with learning something.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'These knowledges'?
Suggestion: This knowledge; These knowledges
...science and many other aspects of life. These knowledge are more interesting and reliable than ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26851851852 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7283025374 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.754126915 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.411764706 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352128004661 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114539834221 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078752995679 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2350944913 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922830477503 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.