22/09/2017Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details.
- why do you want to collect money for the charity organization?
- Ask your friend to help
- explain in detail how your friend can help.
Dear Sam,
long time no see. How have you been? By the way I am looking for your help in a community work we have decided to take on for a human cause.
you already know I am an active member of a community organization and this time around this non-profit organization is all set to give help to people affected by the recent earthquake in my district. Although, our goal is to build small-scale housing for those whose shelter have been completely shattered by the quake and have nowhere to hide, we are first looking to start from fund collection to get there finally. As you have volunteered in similar situations before by launching online campaigns, I was thinking you will be the right man for us to help out.
can you set up a web-page for this social project? I believe having a website can go a long way in our effort to collect fund because people like to trust things on an official site. Digital campaigns for money-raising activities are going well at the moment and having you lead this will definitely take us to our destination.
It will be awesome if you can agree with my proposal. Hope to read back from you soon.
Your friend,
Satish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, long time no see. How have you been? By ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ded to take on for a human cause. you already know I am an active member of a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll be the right man for us to help out. can you set up a web-page for this socia...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Can
...he right man for us to help out. can you set up a web-page for this social p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ad back from you soon. Your friend, Satish
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, so, well, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6018957346 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60534220415 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620853080569 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7464636223 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9166666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198553472433 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752460867736 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522130793793 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11213973574 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458047393586 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.