You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you offer the ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain detailed the concert.
• Why you are unable to go
• How can your friend receive the ticket?
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to offer you the premium tickets of a music concert which I am unable to attend. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate as spoken last time Coldplay is coming to our city for a musical concert. As this is the first ever concert of Coldplay in the India therefore it is a full house since they have a huge fan following in India. The concert starts at 2 pm on Friday at Meridian ground near ITC Sheraton. Although the event will start early I suggest you to go at 7 pm since you will have a premium ticket.
Though I was looking forward to attend this concert as Coldplay is one of my favorite bands but unfortunately I will be travelling to Japan for product launch thus unable to attend the music concert.Since you too are a die-hard fan of this band I believe this is a great opportunity to listen to live music and rejuvenate yourself. The tickets which I am offering has access to premium lounge from where you can have an unobstructed view of the artists playing. Additionally food and drinks are included in the price of the ticket. Lastly I suggest you to send me your email address so that I can email the ticket to you.
I look forward to your response and hope you enjoy the concert.
Regards
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to attending'.
Suggestion: to attending
...ticket. Though I was looking forward to attend this concert as Coldplay is one of my f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
...thus unable to attend the music concert.Since you too are a die-hard fan of this band...
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Line 6, column 463, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...obstructed view of the artists playing. Additionally food and drinks are included in the pri...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ope you enjoy the concert. Regards Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, lastly, look, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39075630252 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47963600797 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4044052139 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0833333333 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379494059782 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127934102405 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994866399942 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253949717476 0.12726935374 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633471898665 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.