Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person's influence on the region he belongs to?
Does native region plays any role in success of a person? Some might argue that successful people are heavily influenced by the region that they belong to, whereas others believe that success has nothing to do with a native place. This essay will discuss why native region can be a major deciding factor in one's success.
Firstly, different countries or states have their own unique ideologies for life and people who live in those areas tend to follow them religiously. If a state is heavily influenced by businessmen then majority of the people automatically goes in the same direction, this results in producing trailblazers who paves way for others to follow. For instance, In India, state of Gujrat has produced more businessmen than any other state who are not only the richest in India but one of the richest in the whole world. When looking at this example, it is evident that effect of region in one's success is more than we think.
Even though region highly affects the success of a person but it doesn't mean every successful person came from the same area. It's the will to become pioneer in any field and their never giving up attitude which drives them towards success. For example, many billionaires or celebrities are college dropouts and they are not even from any influential families but still made it big. Therefore, native place can important but it's not basic requirement.
This analysis establishes that people can become successful without coming from a specific place but if they are from an influential region then their chance of becoming successful is higher. In my opinion, region definitely provides a solid foundation and at the same time it has lot of success stories which can inspire a person to follow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92203389831 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55273819223 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552542372881 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5989971268 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315690921909 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12412188768 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10508182156 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208663061761 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097467656274 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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