Many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Technology has changed drastically over the past years. Some people urge that use of machines to do work is helpful while other believe that it using of machines has more disadvantages. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of this evolution. / Whether the machines are blessing or curse.
On the one hand, there are many advantages of using machines to do the daily activities. Firstly, it saves a plenty of time and manual effort required to do the chore. For an instance, traditional washing of clothes a regular household activity that has been replaced by an automated washing machine which saves amount of time and human efforts required to wash clothes. Secondly, it speeds up the work at workplace such as industry with greater accuracy and less human error. Due to evolution of technology we are not dependent on anybody to do particular activity. Many surveys showed that usage of technology to imitate regular activity let the people to put same time in more creative and productive work. Furthermore, technology has been proved a blessing for the people with physical disability who are stuck with physical moves.
On the other hand, it is rightly said that technology is great when it works but a pain when it doesn’t. As much as merits are concerned related to an individual and society negative impact on health cannot be overlooked. Firstly, because of the dependence on technology the people are becoming lazy and acquiring many ailments such as obesity. Blooming of machines has led to diminish the manual work at industry where lot of human work was required now due to the development of machines it directly affects the employment.
Henceforth, it can be concluded that using of machines to replace activity done by hands has both the pros and cons. Although it is real blessing if it used to a certain extent but completely dependent of it may harm us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.946875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73912392132 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540625 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0953054288 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182790974479 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567385120531 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674380292811 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115633214398 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03861650429 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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