In some countries, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?
The traffic congestion problem increases more serious in recent decades, due to more and more people have their private cars. Under this situation, some governments introduce a congestion tax during rush hour to try to reduce the negative phenomenon. In this article, I intend to discuss the pros and cons about this policy and give my opinion.
We cannot deny that imposed a congestion tax during pecking time is a great solution to address traffic jam. To begin with, extra tax for people to use their own car can increase their daily budget. Therefore, many people may choose public transport service instead of using their private cars and this can reduce many vehicles on the road. In addition, the congestion tax can drive people to choose their on-road time alternatively. They can avoid rush hour and choose other time to go out. Moreover, the congestion tax can bring more money to governments, which can help governments spend more money to improve the public transport service and road system.
Although this policy can bring many benefits to our life, it also has some drawbacks that governments may need consider. Firstly, more tax may increase people’s life pressure, especially to low-income families. Furthermore, if governments impose this regulation, many people many avoid rush time and choose other time to go out, which may cause anther traffic congestion.
In conclusion, in general, I think this development is positive, but governments should have a comprehensive plan before introducing this policy to reduce the drawbacks .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.236 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76112001721 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6699471041 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290589622437 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114753248752 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104191400733 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187625653675 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562474337058 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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