A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right, or the young criminals should be sent to the jail?
Juvenile crime rates increases dramatically in recent years. Some of them have antisocial behaviours, such as destroy schools. When some teenagers do wrong things, they are punished to clean streets instead of sent to the prison. In this article, I intend to analyse this topic and give my opinion.
I agree that children should get punished if they do the wrong thing, but just simply send them to prison is not a good way. To begin with, sending children to jail may lead to a serious impact on their future lives. To be more specific, after they go out of jail, people may discriminate them and make them difficult to find a job. they may hard to find a job. In addition, most young people are not really bad and harmful. If schools can educate them and teach them right behaviours, they will understand right or wrong during their growth. Last but not least, people should give a chance to juveniles to let them find the right path.
By contrast, everyone should have responsibility for their faults. If children break laws many times without regret, they should be sent to jails. Moreover, if children know they will not be sent to prisons, some of them make do something insane, such as killing people.
In conclusion, I agree that not to send children directly to jails if they did the wrong things. But I assert that governments should introduce a specific law to juveniles, if they against this law in some situations, they may be sent to jails.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... and make them difficult to find a job. they may hard to find a job. In addition, mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, really, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68093385214 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48300252085 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9697764423 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1875 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20142446538 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683000938034 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554439896376 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134347228935 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400809402995 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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