Currently, a lot of hot issues related to environment are spreaded all round but person can not do anything to improve it . Therefore, this can be solved through the policies of government as well as by commercial enterprises. In my opinion, this is totally right because rules of government create a restrictions on human 's activities. To begin with, individual can do nothing for nature protection but large companies 's efforts enumerate something because government think about all the country. Moreover, if there is any issue occur in the country then government illustrates alternatives methods to solve this problem. For instance, in the recent of 21 century, a big environmental problems are occurred which create a lot of diseases for human then various policies are made through the various environmental protection act. Hence, it can be depicted that whole situations can be handled just only through the government. Further more, individual just only think about ownself it means he /she can do any selfish thing which creates benefit for him /her. Moreover, large commercial enterprises also provide support to the government in the improvement of nature because they also do some improvement in their production procedures. For example, for the environmental protection, they used various ways Like using the chiming as well as R methods means recycle - reduce- reuse. Therefore, they provides the second hand to the government in the improvement of this aspect. To put in a nutshell, I have a strong determination that the government as well as large companies can do something in the protection of the nature because the government ' s sets rules are implicated on every citizens then they have a pressure to follow this.
- The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. 56
- Many people con of choose to study at university in another country. What kind of problems do you think they would encounter and what are the positive aspects of a decision like this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you 61
- Today, many people getting married at the age of thirties and having children rather than marry at teen age.Is this a positive or negative development? 61
- The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18928571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03551277546 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2741016373 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298600335626 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1133387028 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729255880657 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298600335626 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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