Research suggest that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison would commit crime when set free. Why do you think is the case? What can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, violence is rapidly increasing in all over the world. Survey indicate that most of the prisoners commit brutality activity after jail. There are many reasons behind this issue; however many possible measures can be taken to overcome this problem. Both the aspects are discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
There are several causes to lead this issue. Firs and foremost argue is that they are less likely to be accepted by the society. For example, when they apply for a job, they are more likely to be refused because their criminal history. Thus, as a result of being unemployed and they have no better choice than to go back to their old way. The another reason is that the spirit of retaliation. To elaborate, there are many prisoners who are imprisoned even if they do not have the mistakes therefore, these type of criminals want to revenge with their enemies after a jail and commit crimes.
However, there are some solution that government can consider in dealing with this problem. Firstly, creating suitable job opportunities can reduce the unemployment rate of released criminals. Secondly, regime should encourage those people to retrain and upskill to make it easier for finding a work. For example, they can learn to fix cars or electric appliances make some hand-crafted products, which can help them to appreciate the true value of work and earning money.
In conclusion, some ex-criminals reoffend because of economic and social factors, but government and society can address this issue with some practical measures such as providing job opportunity and helping them to retrain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pportunity and helping them to retrain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14885496183 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61981407566 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9977777294 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168464486227 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499151870533 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426005766918 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956412197399 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281412656107 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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