You have recently shifted to a rental residence but now when you started residing here, you find that the accommodation is beset with certain problems.
Describe the problem
What do you expect the landlord to do
Describe what you will do if the problems are not fixed to your satisfaction.
Dear Mr.Smith,
My name is Pc kings ,i am a new tenant at flat 16. I'm writing to let you know that i'm dissatisfied with my new domicile because my abode is surrounded with manifold problems.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I am facing two major challenges at present. Firstly , blockage of the urinary and as a result, I can't use it. More so ,it stinks badly. Secondly, the kitchen tiles are broken and as result, it harbours pests and rodents. These problems have made house inhabitable.
Please could you please get a plumber and a tiler to fix these issues. If the problems are fixed on time, I will be delighted.
However, should the problems not fixed to my satisfaction, I will ask for a refund of my rental fee . In addition, I will demand for a compensation for inconveniences.
Your's Sincerely,
P.c kings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, My name is Pc kings ,i am a new tena...
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Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Smith, My name is Pc kings ,i am a new tenant a...
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Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Mr.Smith, My name is Pc kings ,i am a new tenant at flat 16. Im writing...
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Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear Mr.Smith, My name is Pc kings ,i am a new tenant at flat 16. Im writing ...
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Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Pc kings ,i am a new tenant at flat 16. Im writing to let you know that im dissati...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...two major challenges at present. Firstly , blockage of the urinary and as a result...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ckage of the urinary and as a result, I cant use it. More so ,it stinks badly. Secon...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and as a result, I cant use it. More so ,it stinks badly. Secondly, the kitchen t...
^^
Line 8, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...I will ask for a refund of my rental fee . In addition, I will demand for a compen...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68243243243 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85128431101 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709459459459 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9604136713 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.3076923077 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3846153846 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126456177464 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345614553121 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452401146432 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752580863713 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041268036288 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.68 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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