Topic: Young people are said to have lost many of the traditional values of the older generations.
The traditions of the older generations are said to become less valued to younger people. Personally, I believe that some of the traditions values are incompatible with the trend of the young generation, whereas, I also agree that others have being preserved the cultural values as the traditions and customs of a nation.
From the one side, with the rapid development of technology, the traditional values are getting progressively overshadowed. The young, today, have tendency to catch up with Western lifestyle. Trendily, teens like to wear all the fashionable clothes and try to imitate their idols. At the same time, furthermore; the rules of marriage in the past have been eroded when young adults have a right to make own choices who or when to marry. Obviously, the difference of relationships between elders and young generations patently presents in modern families. Today, for example, instead of spending time on taking care of children, women can earn money to raise family for men. It is clear that some of traditional rules aren’t accepted or proper for the young.
From the other side, the traditional values have a great contribution to the young’s attitudes. Politeness as well as good manners are always highly appreciated in every conservation, which is a result of earlier regulations. Children, for instance, ought to learn to respect seniority. When meeting the elder, children have to bow and greet the oldest person first. Not only behaviour but the ethnic traditions are also passed from generation to generation. As an evidence to prove cultural preservation, museums, have been built by young people today. Especially, the traditional values, in the contemporary life, are becoming actually necessary on account of being specific characteristics of a nation.
In conclusion, while some of the traditional values of the elder generations have gradually been cleaned up, many of these values have been well-preserved. To my point of view, people should take responsibility for maintaining the positive traditions such as: manners, historic and cultural values and the customs as they have contributed to making unique culture of the country and strengthen our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35057471264 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06568661208 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4811723857 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342441813646 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100975601859 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828649811226 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226057466311 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584412349668 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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