Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Besides basic life skills and simple academic knowledge, the most important thing that younger generations have to learn is how to become decent members of society. Therefore, I strongly believe that not only parents and schools are accountable for nurturing children and aspire them to develop as good citizens.
First of all, to be good members of society, children need to be taught to respect and obey their society rules, and the best place for them to learn this is from their families. Parents and other family members who spend lots of time with children could easily educate them what behaviors are encouraged and what actions should be avoided in their society. As the child aging up, the teaching topics need to extend to their social values, the expectations for children and their roles to the community. Being taught these things help to shape children's characteristics and find themselves as proud members of their society.
As children go to school, they add teachers and peers to their network connection and these people would start to have certain influences on them. By participating in classes and being encouraged to expose their ideas, children gradually learn how to cooperate and communicate with others. Classes also resemble a mini-society, so children could learn to respect people's differences as their classmates come from a variety of background. Moreover, through various lessons, teachers enforce children's pride in their society and show how they could contribute to their community.
However, learning to become decent citizens is not as simple as learning some basic skills. Society itself is complex and it takes a life-long learning journey to understand and fulfill individuals' communal duty. Hence, support from other members of the community is needed to make sure that children are continuously being nurtured and inspired to become able citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to journey'
Suggestion: to journey
...mplex and it takes a life-long learning journey to understand and fulfill individuals c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32225913621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68328321836 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554817275748 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0278966401 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291933802304 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107752981442 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471643359902 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170940745111 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315308005392 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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