land pollution
Land pollution is a critical issue today. Of the land pollution causes, there are two major reasons. The first one is agricultural cultivation. With the growing human population, demand for food has increased considerably, which causes the overuse of these chemicals that results in the poisoning of soil. For example, farmers often use highly toxic fertilizers and pesticides to get rid of insects, and fungi from their crops. Consequently, chemicals on land possibly make the ecosystem unappealing to the survivals of creatures within the interactive food chain. Another cause of land pollution is urbanization. Obviously, due to overpopulation and immigration movements from the countryside to the metropolitan, a large number of construction activities are taking place which has led to large waste articles that can be seen by naked eyes outside any building or office which is under construction. In conclusion, raising our awareness of protecting our land is more essential than ever.
- Young people are said to have lost many of the traditional values of the older generations 63
- Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success at school. 73
- Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage businesses to move from cities to rural? 84
- Topic Young people are said to have lost many of the traditional values of the older generations 67
- Land pollution’s causes 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 716, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...om the countryside to the metropolitan, a large number of construction activities are taking plac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 43.0788530466 14% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 1977.66487455 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 407.700716846 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48366013072 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.195390011 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.524837075471 134% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 75.6406383688 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2222222222 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343604154851 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187486071207 0.076458572812 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215383943562 0.0737576698707 292% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343604154851 0.150856017488 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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