In recent years children are forced to study even in their leisure time. Is this a good practice? Do you agree or disagree?
No one can bring back his childhood and childhood is a precious phase of life which can not be bought at any price. Yes, this is the true fact that nowadays precious fun time of children has been discounted with studies. And I strongly stand on the opposite side of the opinion of imposing burden of studies on kids at the cost of their leisure time. I will produce fact in the following paragraphs to prove myself on the right side.
Firstly, games or leisure are the most important factors of physical as well as mental development of children. There was a survey happened in the east part of India which has surprised the rest of India with its outcome on the kids who have limited or no access to freedom, this has shown that the mental growth of kids due to less freedom has slow down to three times in comparison to the kids who have enough vacations.
Secondly, when kids have freedom they involve themselves in physical activities which is the basic requirement to stay healthy and remain fit. So whenever kids compromise their freedom with studies, it is possible that they will lose their health and which can lead to unhealthy society. Moreover, for the social development purpose of children, they must be encouraged to participate in games, this way they will learn values of team sprit.
To sum up, I must say that studies are equally important for kids as is the freedom but we should teach them to make an equilibrium rather than pushing on either side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
... games, this way they will learn values of team sprit. To sum up, I must say that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62213740458 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43301076899 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7830243464 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122880251673 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536215988648 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500049411501 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700723482279 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342277004299 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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