You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter•Explain your situation•Describe your problems•Tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Sir,
Firstly I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused by me. To elucidate, I had an online interview where my candidature was accepted and subsequently, I was offered an appointment letter with joining on 1st of March 2019 however due to some personal problems I may not be able to join next week. Let me briefly explain.
As you are aware that I am currently staying in LA and needed to relocate to NY for this offered position however there has been an unexpected delay from my relocation company I had hired. The mover company had promised to get the relocation done by the end of this week however there has been a shortage of labour which is causing the delay. Additionally, the place where I am supposed to move in NY does not have a nearby elementary school for my daughter so this is causing an additional delay.
Although I can understand that you were expecting me to onboard by next week however I would need an additional week to close the pending matters. Lastly, I would be able to join by 2nd week of April.
I hope you will approve of the above request.
Yours sincerely
Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, however, lastly, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56930693069 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69434757811 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3476698989 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176485562877 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746655943503 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592633297242 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112510680686 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492570014273 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.