Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Some people argue that history play a vital role in the learning process of individual’s life whereas others prioritize scientific subjects. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the proficiency in science and technology fields is essential more than other areas.
On the one hand, history helps denizens to remember the traditions and cultures and people will be able to tell about the traditions and cultures to the upcoming generations. Moreover, a trip to the historical places during the period of learning will help the pupils to stay connected with their roots and they will get the information about their rich history. For example, whilst visiting Golden Temple, someone can get bunch of knowledge about the things happened in past millenniums such as establishment of Golden Temple, the community kitchen and many more. Furthermore, researchers can be more aware about the pandemics happened in the past decades and they can take initiative steps by giving some vaccines or injections for the sake of humanitarianism.
On the flip side, in the period of modernization, I believe that scientific areas are the need of the hours because having more techno-savvy in a country will boost its economy. The reason behind it is that nowadays, nation’s progress and thrive depend upon the efficiency in agriculture, medical field, army and industrialization and people with excellent skills in technology areas will contribute in nation’s income by producing latest version of weapons, medicines and agricultural tools. Apart from this, more people will get employed with the development of more industries and it will reduce the number of people below poverty line.
In conclusion, I strongly recommend that scientific subjects have now become necessary for individual to get success in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'producing the latest'.
Suggestion: producing the latest
...l contribute in nation's income by producing latest version of weapons, medicines and agric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41901408451 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07544773877 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9680816474 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.9 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188300192777 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754792609862 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582045477159 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115778518159 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850796542335 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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