Talk about the pros and cons of this era as is full of daily inventions.
Since the inception of computer, mankind has come a long way, technology has become an integral part of our lives. These technological advancements have both positive and negative impacts on our lives. I will explain how this proliferation of new inventions has impacted our lives.
There are two types of school of thoughts, First, who say, human being, by nature is curious and have always tried to find ways to make things easier. Since the dawn of its existence humans have always tried to create or invent things that will help him/her accomplish the tasks easier. These new inventions are making us lazy and more prone to diseases, the most common of them being heart disease.
According to the second, the invention of computer has opened new horizons and mankind is accomplishing things never even imagined before. The most conspicuous one are that, now we can learn about the places, cultures and people we could have never imagined to visit or meet. We have stepped foot on moon, have discovered new planets, with new machines we have built sky-high, multistory buildings. The distances have become shorter; we don't need to travel for weeks or months to visit another country that can be done within hours. Now we are filled with more knowledge than ever with the help of which we have been able to cure many diseases and viral infections.
In the conclusion, these new inventions are not only helping us to live easier lives but also helping us saving many. So in my opinion technological innovations has more boon than bane to our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since the inception of computer the mankind h...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagined visiting'.
Suggestion: imagined visiting
...cultures and people we could have never imagined to visit or meet. We have stepped foot on moon, ...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... The distances have become shorter; we dont need to travel for weeks or months to v...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
...o live easier lives but also helping us saving many. So in my opinion technology innov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53393713465 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9965984252 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0167501151335 0.242375264174 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00682844318228 0.0925447433944 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0170318091825 0.071462118173 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00938834246019 0.151781067708 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102715049067 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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