There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
The increasing technological advancements have led to the transformation of the music industry too, which has certainly pushed people to follow international music more than the traditional one. In this essay, we will discuss the importance of music in an individuals life and the need to preserve the traditional music as it is the only things beyond building and monuments which can be used to express the same emotions over the period of time.
Singer Michael Jon, once said, “Music is life and without it, life is like a guitar without strings”. In other words, it provides rhythm and style to the live. Additionally, people prefer to listen to music when they are sad or they need some motivation. For instance, swimmer Jordan used to listen to the same track again and again before the race, as he correlated his struggle and personal life with it. Even, the psychologist has examined the same and stated that people listening to constant inspirational music tend to create a high possibility of getting success as their mind is trained to do the same through the tones and music patterns.
On the other hand, the increasing accessibility of world wide web has pushed people to chose western music over their own. This resulted in a situation, wherein the young generation does not know anything thing about local music while having full knowledge of the international one. Moreover, regional music holds the essence of the locality, culture, and traditions followed, thus giving no importance to them can even make the condition worse. The at most important of such activities is that it is a kind of employment to hundreds of local artist, thus moving towards the other sector may also affect them. For example, Rajasthan folk singer Manisha Choudhary was once the highest paid artist in the country, but right now she is finding it hard to even get a single concert in a month to cover her expenses.
To sum up, albeit the technology has improved many sectors like the computer and mobile phones, still music holds the same importance and is a way to express feelings, which can not be replaced in the near future also. Moreover, there is an urgent need to save the local artist and music otherwise the art and culture of a certain place will be lost and taken over by the international music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8835443038 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70905003479 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572151898734 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2728824075 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.785714286 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2142857143 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347221118074 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115212650982 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952353800751 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223674581155 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838966317979 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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