todays's life is easier than it was when our grandparents were children
The twenty-first century is very exciting and advanced. Advanced technology has been increasing day by day. It is easier for people to live a luxurious life since people have many facilities. Although other people believe that the past life of our grandparents was easier than today, I think that people are very comfortable in the modern era. I think this way due to a few reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, in the past days, there was the absence of electricity, fast transportation, and fewer facilities. In contrast, in this era, people have various types of transportation and many other facilities which are helpful for people. For example, people can easily travel out of the country by airlines. Airlines are now very cheaper so people from every class can afford them. Additionally, for routine transportation bus services, cars, cabs, metro trains are available. Therefore, it is easier for people to go to one place to another place.
The second and the same exquisite proof for this assertion is that people can live a wealthy life today. People can easily fulfill their basic needs since all people are educated, and they can find a job very easily. In these days, all people are able to live a happy life because they have enough sources to earn money. However, in the past time, a very miniature number of children could get an education. For instance, my grandmother did study until the seventh standard because there were no higher secondary schools available in their community. Therefore, she had worked in farms and it was a very hard time for her.
On the contrary, in the past, there was no competition in the job due to less educated people. At that time, people's basic needs were very few. So, they were satisfied with what they have. In today's life, people's desires are more so they do hard work to fulfill it. To illustrates this, the most compelling example of my grandfather. His salary was only 350 rupees per month still he was able to manage his home and family.
In conclusion, based on the above-mentioned arguments, I am of the opinion that today's life is easier than our grandparent's life. This is because people can live very easy way due to advanced technology. Furthermore, people can easily earn money to do expenses behind their family since most of the people are educated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87128712871 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6709652721 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532178217822 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9569618517 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6923076923 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198190623406 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564978192507 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888675893421 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130027388368 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618085490296 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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