You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing with regard to my issue concerning my roommate.
I am a senior student taking Academic English. I am currently occupying a twin room and the person that I share this accommodation with happens to be a part of the university's choir. She has been practicing for their group's presentation for the upcoming school event and usually finishes late. As a result, I have not had enough sleep for weeks, thus losing focus in completing my papers which is due in 2 weeks.
If you would permit, I would like to request to be transferred to a single room as soon as there is an available space. Being in my last semester, unnecessary distractions like this, would not help me in finishing all the requirements needed for graduation.
Hoping for your kind consideration. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Joyce Jabonero
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to my issue concerning my roommate. I am a senior student taking Academic Eng...
^
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...senior student taking Academic English. I am currently occupying a twin room and ...
^
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...our kind consideration. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, well, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85806451613 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88974648637 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716129032258 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1923526562 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4545454545 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159593307949 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574897185582 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05766599348 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993397694374 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359282133134 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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