Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while other think that people and communities are become more isolated.
Discuss both view and give your opinion
It is certainly true that use of internet is increasing day by day with the motto of bringing people closer. It is often argued that growth of internet always helps to brought positive relations in human life, whilst other disagree and think it will lead to worse the relationship also. This essay agrees that an increase in use of internet helps to create good and healthy relations with other. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that technology has provided various means to people through which they can easily communicate than even before. Moreover, users have the ability to make calls and chats to the friends living far from them. It is therefore agreed that internet is very essential tool for bringing people closer by forgetting issue. For example, this is most evident in my country that nowadays maximum number of people are friendly and closer due to help of internet they can use facebook, twitter, messenger to know each other daily life and happening things.
However, many disagree and feel that internet deprives of real human interaction. People will limit their life on technology and want everything in few clicks. It makes people irrational and irresponsible because of their unpresentive behavior in social issues and affairs. Despite this, effective communication is still possible through internet and this essay disagree inter should be banned for this reason. For instance, skype and whats app make it possible for people to exchange their relations and make it good that were never before.
In conclusion, while the benefits of internet allow people to enhance the comfort level in conversations, some still feel that people should be aware about its negative consequences so that no distance will arise in people relations. At last, I personally think that internet has play very curical role nowadays to maintain peace and stability in human relation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... it will lead to worse the relationship also. This essay agrees that an increase in ...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...or this reason. For instance, skype and whats app make it possible for people to exch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12179487179 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55899330706 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573717948718 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3285207412 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295538284396 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938179276011 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572811111527 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182127580046 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485996537068 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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