A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
-Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
-Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
-Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Ana,
I just got your letter few days ago in which you were asking me for a job here in Saudi Arabia. Casually I recall that last week, an acquaintance of mine that is working in Aqualia K.S.A., he informed me that they are looking for a Mechanical Engineer for a water treatment plant here South Riyadh. I think that this opportunity really suits you, it’s your area of ability!
Reading your profile on LinkedIn as you suggested me in your letter.I was impressed about the huge experience that you have precisely in this field !. I didn't realize till now that you have almost 15 year experience in construction and you were involved in the water treatment plant of Dubai and Cairo, both state-of-the-art in such technologies.
If you’re interested in this position, send your résumé and a cover letter in the Aqualia K.S.A. website. There you will find in the vacant position section the description and many other relevant details and you will be able to send your application.
I really wish you the best,
Ilde.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ll be able to send your application. I really wish you the best, Ilde. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...cation. I really wish you the best, Ilde.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89887640449 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73982337525 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8149208844 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438582704226 0.216113520407 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199160341553 0.0766984524023 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940582075108 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252975495988 0.12726935374 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064346660143 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.