All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skill but other thin having a range of subjects is better for a children’s future. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that, parents nowadays are more conscious about better possible options to their children. It is argued that academic institutions should help child to equip with more comprehensive artistic factors as a positive development whilst, other disagree that having wide variety of academic courses help better ways to shape out their future endeavor. This essay agrees that schools are the best platform to understand the child behavior and strength with more significant skills to fill the gap to fit with individual goal and objectives. The essay discuss both point of view.
With regards to the positive concern, every children depend with their schools in regards to learn meaningful skills after the family environment. Moreover, they find very comfortable and warmth environment in school to explore their personality, learn every important character and skills leads to successful career in a professional and protective environment. It is therefore agreed that, they get maximum options to flourish their immature sense to the mature one through learning by doing. For example, this is most evident in my country that, every families in present moment are convinced with the environment provided by school to enhance their child skill and get enrolled their children on timely manner.
However many disagree and feel that, getting focused on the multiple course book automatically boost up their innovative knowledge and skills to accomplish their future goal and objective. It allows children to have hues information related to the nature of subjects and they do not have to distract their mind in multiple sector for getting life learning skills. Despite this, professional guidance from school is still the best way to develop the mind conceptually along with more resources and this essay disagrees on only variety of subjects would help children to secure their future. For instance, this is most evident in my country that school nowadays focus on multiple extra-curricular to learns the different skills rather than focusing on the course of study.
In conclusion, while the benefit of having professional environment is school allow children with more friendly and meaningful skills along with relevant knowledge, some people still feels that focusing on the multiple subjects helps them to conquer their future goal. However, I personally think that school is the best place for children to develop their career and personality in more secure way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 566, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'discusses'.
Suggestion: discusses
...dividual goal and objectives. The essay discuss both point of view. With regards to t...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...very children depend with their schools in regards to learn meaningful skills after the famil...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...lled their children on timely manner. However many disagree and feel that, getting fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39845758355 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70814783025 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516709511568 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2759458389 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7857142857 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286142133243 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112206685345 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565021596543 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192182250044 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385192800618 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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