The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern life. What are the advantages of this trend ? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
There is no iota of doubt that the packed food is becoming increasingly popular throughout the globe. In this fast paced world the ready-made food helped masses to match the speed of modern life. However, there are both pros and cons of this development. The following paragraphs would shade light on the both prospective of this notion before making a final note.
There are numerous reasons why people prefer convenience food instead of home cooked food. Firstly, it saves cooking time. In present scenario public have no time for cooking due to their hectic schedule. Since people give preference to ready-made food, the popularity of traditional food decreased significantly. For an instance, cup noodles are easy to prepare, just add some hot water to it and stir well, it is ready for eat. Moreover, availability around the every corner of world is another factor which support this trend, a person can easily buy his lunch during travel to office. Finally, packed foods are affordable for the masses with low-income. Consequently, in these days, packed food become indispensable part of daily life due to fast paced life, where everyone has very less time for cooking.
Turning to the other side of argument, there are some drawback of this trend. First and foremost, packed food contain too much fat and spices which responsible for a number of health issues. Likewise, a recent survey shows that obesity and heart disease are directly related to convenience food. In addition to this, nutrition value of modern packed food is very less as compare to homemade food. Besides, this type of foods contain preservatives to avoid contamination but these are also responsible for deteriorating health. Hence, excessive use of packed food may harm health and should be avoided in routine life.
In conclusion, although ready-made food offer a number of benefits to masses, I believe that disadvantages in terms of health issues eventually outweigh any negatives.
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...sues eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.165625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72129729805 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7841087104 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225073158084 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699108922218 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542128267881 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133329409921 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029802468411 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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