Some people prefer to live town. Others prefer to live in a big city, which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Big cities, which most of the country’s people live in. for instance, my own country which is Afghanistan has a population of 30millions and 7 millions of them live in the kabul which is a big city. So therefore, I prefer big cities cause they will provide us much more facilities and opportunities.
First of all, big cities have dozens of facilities and could provide us much more things to do. Personally, when I was in our town(Mazar-e-Sharif), I barely could have a job that have much money and less to do.And also that time was when I graduated from college which I badly needed a job, which the only jobs where in my town was cleaning restaurants and washing clothes. In which I don’t get enough time to do my own stuff like making Apps and creating video games. But, after going to Kabul which is a big city. thousands of work apppered which I could do and would get much money in less time . So, I applied for ghazanfar groups of company in position of design manager. Therefore, in which I could do my work and have a great time to do my own stuff.and sometimes I could do my work from my home. Which saves my time travelling( from home to office and office to home).
Second of all, big cities have much of facilities: have much more equipped hospitals, schools and offices.
I still remember that time when my mom was ill. She was suffering from blood cancer and our town hospital doesn’t had that much facilities that could help my mother to be cured. All doctors told us to take your mother a big city hospital and some of them named a famous hospital: German hospital. Therefore, we took her to Germans hospital and they guarantee us that she would get alright.and by taking in only six month she got cured. doctors told us to take her in here,in every 6months for checking. And by seeing all these facilities I and family decided to live in a big city.
In conclusion, would like to say that big cities make life easier and much more comfortable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '7 million'.
Suggestion: 7 million
...stan has a population of 30millions and 7 millions of them live in the kabul which is a big c...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: SO_THEREFORE[1]
Message: Use simply 'So' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: So; Therefore
... live in the kabul which is a big city. So therefore, I prefer big cities cause they will p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kabul which is a big city. So therefore, I prefer big cities cause they will prov...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more facilities and opportunities. First of all, big cities have dozens of ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...job that have much money and less to do.And also that time was when I graduated fr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...less to do.And also that time was when I graduated from college which I badly nee...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thousands
...ter going to Kabul which is a big city. thousands of work apppered which I could do and w...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...do and would get much money in less time . So, I applied for ghazanfar groups of c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... groups of company in position of design manager. Therefore, in which I could do ...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...our town hospital doesn't had that much facilities that could help my mother to...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...d get alright.and by taking in only six month she got cured. doctors told us to take ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Doctors
...taking in only six month she got cured. doctors told us to take her in here,in every 6m...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...red. doctors told us to take her in here,in every 6months for checking. And by seei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50833333333 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63451651177 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7343079276 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4210526316 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15380124805 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585105093986 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628892915417 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968754127481 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880711844209 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.