The space travel is fantastic these days and they are very fascinate towards its but there are many environmental problems in our planet we should resolve the problems or travel space and spend a lot of money?
Recently, in many countries around the whole world, but it had become an extremely controversial issue tha Government should spend money on space travel rather than environment problems because both are mandatory for humankind. Therefore, government should allocate equal resource to both. this must be stopped and proper solutions should be applied. Therefore, for the discussion for some problems and suggest some pssible solution.
To begin with, obviously, a great deal of ways to cause and space travel is the responsibility of government for the welfare of people on the earth because when the research would be done then it would definitely aids to humankind. Such as Scientist's would find out the treatment of incurable disease and can save many precious life of people by the doctor's and specialist's. Furthermore, natural resource that are going to scarce on the earth can found and on other planet. Natural resource such as Fossil fuels, minerals and water are very important to live on the earth.
On the other hand, although, space travel would have some fruitful results but the problems of poverty, unemployment, terrorism and pollution has becoming a lead concern on the earth. Moreover, government should expenditure on these environmental problem first people who live in rural area are not awaking about environment issue and the awareness must be driven in those area by organize campaign.
In conclusion, i pen down saying spending too much money on research of mars and moons is worthless in front of these problems because government should solve the fundamental problem of humanity first after that they think about the other planet and there should be balance between both.
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Message: Did you mean 'balanced'?
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...ut the other planet and there should be balance between both.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7396818758 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4290208745 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258510700298 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852486151767 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680946888948 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158874336393 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469224477103 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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