Today, many people do not realise how important the natural world is.
Why is this?
How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?
People, these days are using artificial flowers to decor their living room because flowers don't need water and soil to grow. They are using them because they are cheap and doesn't need care and nourishment. However, it is important to understand that these artificial artifacts don't help in cleaning the environment but deteriorating the health of humans by releasing plastic in the ecosystem.
With the advent of technology, the human is becoming more dependent on their own products like multivitamins. As soil nutrients are depriving due to use of pesticides and we are unable to get daily minimum nutritional values. Moreover, We are cooking lab-based meats to feed our rapidly growing population. In a recent survey conducted by the Medical Association of India, the consumption of daily supplements is rocketed 5 times from 2013 in the present year. In the long run, synthetic dietary products will be cheap for companies and populace to produce and consume respectively. Due to the consumption of unnatural products, the number of people with diseases like cancer, heart attack, etc. are multiplying.
As we are moving away from a natural diet like organic fruits, vegetables, legumes and many more, getting more prone to chronic diseases. It is significant for people to move on organic and natural food to get rid of deadly diseases in early young age. The government should start giving rebates on organic seeds and agriculture land to promote healthy living. They should give free training to farmers to not use pesticides and use biological way to protect crops.
In conclusion, it is crucial to maintain our lifestyle in a natural way. Providing better technique to grow and maintaining a healthy style of living is difficult because of the population but science can help in achieving it. So, start using jute bags and boycott plastic bags.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e using them because they are cheap and doesnt need care and nourishment. However, it ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...erstand that these artificial artifacts dont help in cleaning the environment but de...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a natural way" with adverb for "natural"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...it is crucial to maintain our lifestyle in a natural way. Providing better technique to grow and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14851485149 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82574558086 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1796501095 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958553906418 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263876329471 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383692062066 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523993540343 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031929164609 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.